Friday, July 25, 2014

Expressive Writing Term 3 2014

Today the sun rose up and shined like a mirror reflecting back on us. The sun heated us like we were a piece of meat getting ready to be barbecued and get mashed with potatoes. 

Then a minute later then pours the rain it is the tomato sauce and the sun flowers grew so yellow it looked like mustard.

The sun was so hot that an ice block could not last for a minute and even the ice cream couldn't last for a minute it just turned into a milkshake.

The sun came down and we were all so hot so we all had a camp outside just the stars and we thought that we saw the Matariki stars but unfortunately we didn't spot it.

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